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My Role

Role: Designer for Studentheadz
Aim: My aim in this project is to create graphics for our game which collaborate with our chosen theme.
After chosen this role I began researching different gaming graphics and the styles in which they were created. For the production of the game itself I will be designing the Logo, any promotional Posters we plan on distributing to make awareness about our project. In order to complete this task I will be researching different examples of posters that work well at present. As all of the members in our group agreed we really wanted to make our game fun and enjoyable I have to create the graphics to work hand in hand with what we want the user to feel.
For this project I will be sketching up the Character and scanning them onto the computer, I will be doing this as I feel it is much better as I can then use Flash or Photoshop to trace over them. All my designs will be new, memorable and will match the visual identity of our game.
As well as the game design I will also be working collectively with Paul Gneockey our hardware designer. Paul and I both feel we can use both our skills in order to create the hardware for the complete look of our game.
As I create each element of design for each mini game I will be getting feedback from my group. Each member will let me know their thoughts just so we are all in agreement that they are happy with the quality of the work.